The omega Jiang Shaoyan, known as “Yan Ge”, is a big man on campus. As the heat period is coming closer and closer, he thought he would find an alpha that stronger than him. To his surprise, a junior male schoolmate of his suddenly came to him and said he has a crush on him. Wait, how dare he spoke to him like that? What wrong with that guy?
##少汪幾句
評分##塊塊厲害!塊塊好可愛!我愛琰哥和小汪!
評分想法很好,但這文筆,我覺得不太行……
評分##黎明之後可以打五星,少汪幾句和專屬深愛都是故事裏的戀愛濃度過高,實在無聊,缺乏張力,即便再怎麼努力營造那種對立和拉扯都太刻意,全靠人設來撐,人設上汪又比江好很多,更豐富飽滿。冰塊兒算比較好的網文作者瞭,就憑黎明之後一篇我都願意期待她,太太加油。
評分##黎明之後可以打五星,少汪幾句和專屬深愛都是故事裏的戀愛濃度過高,實在無聊,缺乏張力,即便再怎麼努力營造那種對立和拉扯都太刻意,全靠人設來撐,人設上汪又比江好很多,更豐富飽滿。冰塊兒算比較好的網文作者瞭,就憑黎明之後一篇我都願意期待她,太太加油。
評分##隻會哈哈哈草字頭。比較“著名”但是讀完也就忘瞭
評分##費勁吧啦,不是長嘴瞭嘛,兩個人這個費勁啊,各種誤會俗瞭吧唧的
評分##小甜餅童話故事
評分##🌿!甜得要死!最愛看又乖又奶還哭唧唧的年下舔狗攻被欺負瞭嗚嗚嗚➕🌟!相比之下受的人設有點刻意,魅力值不足